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T matter because someone else flew with a giant bird and brought it back in time bird and brought it back in time of which happened out of screen and without anyone being informed about it until it was all over Meaning the author got lazy and threw in a cheap solution Then they teleport with magic to their next estination Meaning all this time they could have used giant birds or teleportation to go anywhere they like in seconds but ROMANCE (African American Romance Multicultural Romance Contemporary Romance) 11: Billionaires Secret Baby (Interracial Romance BWWM Short Stories Urban Baby Romance) didn t because the author forgot about themAfter that we have a typical fighting tournament full of cheesy clich s we have seem countless times accompanied with women s clothes being ripped apart and revealing underwear Why are weebs making fake accounts forownvoting my book but nobody cares "ABOUT HISAFTER THAT THEY NEED TO "hisAfter that they need to one of their companions who got lost IELTS 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start a campfire Why not burnown the whole forest Where is the consistency Then the heroes have to play a stupid videogame battle And they Das Schwert der Totengöttin do that by cosplaying so they can role play in a role playing game story which is an imitation of other role playing games Roleplayception Most of themie The Algorithmic Beauty of Seaweeds Sponges and Corals during the challenge but turns out it was all fake suspense because it was just a game and thus they all come back to life Hurray for reset buttonsAnd if you think that was tensionless when they move to the next challenge itoesn t even exist I am not joking they passed the test and got a seal without Black Love Signs : An Astrological Guide to Passion, Romance and Relationships for African Americans (aka Sexy Black Sun Signs: An Astrological Guide to Love and Romance for African-Americans) doing anything because Mathieu got lazy with finding things for them too and wanted to get over with it as soon as possible More villains appear towards the end of the book and the only thing we ever learn about them is their name Mathieu Manipulation and Dark Psychology didn t even bother to give them a backdrop or even explain why they hadn tone a thing all this time Why Women's Activism and Social Change Rochester New York 1822 1872 did people pay 80000ollars for the adaptation of this garbage One of the most The Western Scar: The Theme of the Been-To in West African Fiction dramatic parts of the story is Misty not wanting to be a goddess because she will be immortal while the person she loves will grow old andie Well turns out that wasn t much of a problem either because you can simply stop his internal clock Because that s how aging works You have an internal clock you can stop it and that will keep you young forever Instead of I Understanding Shutter Speed don t know freezing you in time because your clock is stoppedAnd then out of nowhere the cat person reveals that he is the protagonist s brother kidnapped as a child and turned into a cat No foreshadowing no build up and no investment in the characters for this to work That s the kind of writer Mathieu is and got over one million subscribers by making top ten loli tentacle porn listsTo make a long stupid story short after that they complete the challenges a bunch of time travel bullshit happens and it s revealed that the leader of all villains wanted to controlestiny by fulfilling a prophecy concerning the chosen one Who of course turns out to be the protagonist So yeah just like all bullshit stories The Mother I Carry: A Memoir of Healing from Emotional Abuse do it all comesown to being Anthology of Articles on African Linguistics and Literature destined too something and not because you chose to Everything was predetermined So why The Writing Workshop did the villain reveal all thisestiny bullshit if he planned to kill the hero all along For personal satisfaction he says Geez I sure hope that is not going to lead to his Agricultural Engineering downfall Whom are we kidding of course and itid Some convenient bullshit happens and they lived happily ever after not since it actually ends with a cliffhanger This was just the first of three books Pay Mathieu money to read those as well and see him running away with you money That s exactly what he Distant Echoes Finding Keys To Life After Abuse did with the adaptation He made a few minutes of horrible animation canceled the project and is now laughing with the house he bought with your bucks Wellone anime community Well How Debuggers Work Algorithms Data Structures and Architecture done. 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Chronexia and the Eight SealsHonestly my opinion is a little bias because i watch the authors YouTube channel and support him on patron but i really enjoyed the book it An Alien Heat did have typos but they seemed to weed them selves out further into the book and i really liked the characters but he isn t the best at hisescriptions in the book and it could of had some work The Alchemy of Culture: Intoxicants in Society done but still in my opinion pretty good also hes making an anime off of this Based on what the author has said he wrote this novel when he was a teenager From that standpoint heid a good job writing it especially since he states that English is not his first language However the editing problems get in the "way of the story It is a ecent idea but the tropes are numerous which makes "of the story It is a ecent idea but the tropes are numerous which makes it tedious It Sonic Alchemy: Visionary Music Producers and Their Maverick Recordings does get better as the story progresses but it is still in need of careful editing and rewriting Absolutely a testament to how NOT to write a coherent fantasy Concepts are of the run of the mill variety making their presentation of infoumping feel utterly pointless The book is riddled with grammatical errors and typos Logic is simply not a concept in this story whatsoever and certain situations are just to pander to his audience and would never happen in unless this was the case Want to know why Because he thought that he was writing a Light Novel not some fantasy of grandeur that amateur writers still manage to mess up I encourage Mathieu to continue his project but the fundamentals of coherent writing need to be taught to him first video version a cover that is totally otaku bait and ideals aimed at elementary school children when the book is otherwise a teenage geek s fan fiction Chronexia and the Eight Seals is a perfect example of what happens when you Mapping wild gardens: The symbolic conquest of South Africa (African literatures in English) don t give a shit about uality When you begin your story by infodumping the basics through narration only serves to prove you are incapable to wave exposition through the plot Also narration becomes meaningless when your world building is basic as fuck The most generic setting with the most generic fantasy racesoing the most generic magic stuff You might as well not bother at all with such Gramatica de baza a limbii romane descriptions The anime adaptation was so fucking boring when trying toepict that it had to resort to fan service for preventing the weebs from zoning out Also there is nothing wrong in trying to have some sort of reasoning in your fantasy world The thing that sustains the planet is a huge unprotected sphere in the middle of nowhere How the hell this world was not Suggestive Inuiry into the Hermetic Mystery with a Dissertation on the More Celebrated of the Alchemical Philosophers Being an Attempt Towards the Recovery of the Ancient Experiment of Nature destroyed a feways after its creation when enemies are constantly attacking it and there is absolutely no protection around its weak spot Even those who protect it College University Budgeting: College And University Budgeting don t live next to it they fly there from the other side of the planet every time it gets attacked Where is the logic in that And the thing is I pointed that out to Mathieu and told him to fix it in theamn adaptation only for him to not give a fuck and keep it the same Because he Integrating Cleveland Baseball didn t give a shit about his own story If you plan to kill someone two pages after she is introducedon t expect the reader to care no matter how The Modern Drunkard's Adventures with Alcohol dramatic you make it seem to be We know nothing about that character you never mention her again for the rest of the book youidn t bother to flesh her out through flashbacks therefore she was a wasted character Also how can a corpse still be moving WTF Mathieu she wasn t a zombie and she wasn t Grassroots Leviathan dead yet A goddess appears out of nowhere says she won t revive the woman and leaves immediately Whyid she even bother to appear if all she Voices and Veils did was saying no before leaving That s what happens when youon t know what to o with a character One of the heroes calls his team lame because they just saved billions of lives but failed to save a single civilian What is this a war with only one casualty This is unacceptable you all suck There shouldn t be repercussions or sacrifices in an empowerment fantasy story The editing is horrible since entire paragraphs are constantly repeating throughout the book I pointed this out to Mathieu and he idn t bother to fix it I mean why would he It s not like this is his passion project and people pay money for it Don t give a fuck About Your Stories And Never Correct Spelling And Grammar your own stories and never correct spelling and grammar like 57 Ways to Screw Up in Grad School do Feedback is for fools The first thing you read about one of the major characters before she even gets to appear for the first time is a stupid sex joke The first shot of her in the adaptation is her ass That s how you make your audience to instantly lose respect for herHow can the impact of an explosion be small when it shakes the whole house Also whyo the people inside immediately jump to conclusions and assume it s an invasion It was just a single explosion not the war cries of an army of orcs How Love in Bloom do you load a meteor in your hand Whyoes it instantly change its name to a burning ball The villain loves to torture people and a few lines afterwards he says that he loves to kill people Make up your mind Also why African Native Literature: Or, Proverbs, Tales, Fables and Historical Fragments in the Kanuri or Bornu Language do you leave and invite your enemies to chase. Days were pretty average for Tom Watson a seventeen year old swordsman in training Along with his best friend Misty and his aunt Noemi he bored himself toeath That's why Tom has wanted to travel the world once he'll be one with. ,


You by revealing where you will go next when all you want to o is torture them or kill them Make up your mind Why Hermetic Alchemy Science and Practice The Golden Dawn Alchemy Series 2 do the heroes need to walk for half aay They have giant flying birds with which they can travel to the other side of the planet They were also in a village full of people horses and wagons Why IELTS Academic and General Task 2 How to Write at a Band 9 Level don t they just take a wagon Whyoesn t anyone from the surrounding towns go there in wagons to see what is going on After all the black smoke could be seen for hundreds of miles And even if they BWWM do walk all the way to the next town what exactly is their plan They are weaker than the enemy way slower than him since he can fly there is no way to warn anyone before he arrives and even if he waits for them to arrive before heoes his shit they are only heading towards a trap What is their freaking planWhy are they speaking Greek This is a fantasy setting it has nothing to Morning by Morning: How We Home-Schooled Our African-American Sons to the Ivy League do with Earth nobody speaks earth languages Holy shit you can also travel in time That s the ultimate plotevise But you can t save someone s life like that What How Al-Anon Works for Families Friends of Alcoholics does that mean If you go back and stop that meteor from being loaded what will be the result The town will be unharmed but all its citizens willrop BWWM (Interracial Romance BWWM African American Multicultural Romance) *1 (Interracial Romance BWWM African American Multicultural Romance) *1: Billionaires Secret Baby (BWWM Secret Baby Romance Contemporary Romance) dead from a heart attack What kind of logic is this Whyo you need to color code all the seals on the map You think we are too stupid to recognize the elements without colors Why is everything in this world named after elements Why Prophetic Activism did this horrible book sell a thousand copies while my superior book with a much better map sold a hundred Whoa explaining how strong someone is with numbers instead of showing it through their actions You make Toriyama so proud Howo they even measure mana Do they cast scan or are they wearing battle power scoutersWhat Romance do you mean you can t come with them because you have too much work You are an elite warrior and there is a maniac out there killing all your friends and family Dammit Mathieu what kind of lazy excuses are you giving us so the battle won t be easy And whyo they even have this stupid uest so one of them can become a goddess Their uest is to stop the villain in the next town not Flyboy Action Figure Comes with Gasmask deification These two things are not connected in any way and there is a lot of urgency so why are they sidetracking all the time And now they go shopping Whyo they need to pay money when they are on a uest to save the world Tell that elite who saved the world so many times to let them get everything they need so they won t all Teaching Feminist Activism: Strategies from the Field die if the heroes fail And what happened to the urgency They were running to stop the villain in oneay they lost a whole ay in recovery and now they are shopping How the a whole ay in recovery and now they are shopping How the Culture Moves did the villain appear just now Was heoing nothing all this time And from where Message in a Bottle: The Making of Fetal Alcohol Syndrome did all thoseemons come from all of a sudden Why Respect Love does the villain even needemons to Introduction To Combinatorial Algorithms And Boolean Functions destroy the town Heestroyed the previous one all alone by simply loading a meteor Since when Computer Algorithms C++: C++ and Pseudocode Versions do windows explode when you jump out of them And why is the villain flying away again without killing his enemies None of this makes any sense Godso no ie until their plasmic points become zero #Do they get stronger by tingling backs too Why oes his #they get stronger by tingling backs too Why Biologically Inspired Algorithms for Financial Modelling (Natural Computing Series) does his have a bigger average than mine Whato you mean you Obumselu on African Literature dislike killing The reason you are in thisamn uest is so you can kill the villain Also you can t become a goddess without killing the monster in the uest and you will SIN FILTRO Y SIN ALCOHOL die if youon t So why are you flip flopping than a fancy pair of summer shoesAre you seriously telling me your main characters learned how to fight by training with toys You His Abused Mate don t learn how to fight like that A golem jumps out of a pirate ship and attacks them What the hell is a golemoing on a ship Why are the pirates renamed to barbarians The golem is male I on t know what the hell is going on any They are fighting barbarians on a pirate ship that has a male golem or somethingTwo women arrive to provide first aid They have slanted eyes huge boobs and cyan panties I guess this is the author manifesting his erotic fantasies One of them is named Suling so I guess we are in some sort of fictional China But wait "The Other One Is "other one is Asuka Isn t that Japanese The author is manifesting an erotic threesome Well what a coincidence from all the places in the world the villain appeared on this exact location even though he never said he would go there next Oh and the Japanese imitations can summon Greek gods for some reason Oh and one of them gets poisoned and needs an antidote Oh and none of that has any consistency They find a cat person and they fight each other with numbers that are going up and own in whatever way suits the plot The Teaching: Education and Academics at the turn of the century. duel is interrupted when the villain appears out of nowhere once again breaks havoc and teleports away The cat person then reveals he is after that villain as well and becomes an ally Wellone villain if you hadn t appeared your enemies 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School Unfortunately his travel begins a bit abruptly than he originally planned it when an enemy from the past makes its returnIt's now up to Tom Misty Noemi and their traveling companions to put a stop to this madness Hopefully